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Animatic for my short

Posted on August 12, 2007  5 Comments
Filed under Animation Mentor, Drawings, Short film, Tablet PC

Ok sorry about the delay but I was a bit paranoid that someone would steal my idea that I didn’t want to show it until now.

Anyway, here it is for the ones who haven’t seen it yet.

While working on the layout I realised that some areas still needed a bit more definition so back to the drawing boards.



5 Responses to “Animatic for my short”

  1. Mel Milton on August 12th, 2007 14:35

    Thats a sharp lookin animatic Oliver!!! Look forward to seeing your progress

  2. Daniel on August 13th, 2007 00:13

    ae oliver, simple and snap, that´s good, you gonna have time to spend on the animation making it shine. I just wonder if you could make clearer that he is a vampire, with same signs in his house, dunno, maybe a coffin in the back or something. ok we don´t see his image in the mirror but samething else just to comfirm. dunno just my opinion.
    well done, have you started again school or still in break?

  3. dutruc on August 13th, 2007 09:39

    you are right Daniel, thanks

  4. dutruc on August 13th, 2007 10:29

    and yeah I am on a break at the moment looking for work just like you ;-)

  5. tim on August 15th, 2007 17:16

    i like it, a nice idea thats short and simple.

    i like the way it starts and it’s a bit confusing, i just think that when you want the audience to get that he’s a vampire it should be clearer. maybe you see he’s teeth a bit earlyer or something, i don’t know if thats the best way or even a good way, but i think you should try and find a way.

    good stuff keep working on it

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